My Proposition:SB1070 should have not been passed because police officers will have the urge to suspect anyone, which can lead to embarrassment and offense to the suspects.
Hi Isabelle, Your proposition is a single sentence and states an opinion. Rather than "SB 1070" though, it would probably be better to name the issue--"immigration enforcement should not allow for stops of...."
Hi Isabelle,
ReplyDeleteYour proposition is a single sentence and states an opinion. Rather than "SB 1070" though, it would probably be better to name the issue--"immigration enforcement should not allow for stops of...."
mrs s
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