-I think you are best at ideas. You always have something to say. Your explanation is informative, and comes to life (I agree with your friends). I like the way you express yourself in your essays. My favorite essay so far was your theme essay. Your father and I enjoyed it when you read to us. -I would not say weak. You are just stronger in ideas. I think your next best is your voice. Then your last traits are word choice and organization. -You could manage your time a little better. Make sure that you really push yourself to the best you can be.
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ReplyDelete-I think you are best at ideas. You always have something to say. Your explanation is informative, and comes to life (I agree with your friends). I like the way you express yourself in your essays. My favorite essay so far was your theme essay. Your father and I enjoyed it when you read to us.
ReplyDelete-I would not say weak. You are just stronger in ideas. I think your next best is your voice. Then your last traits are word choice and organization.
-You could manage your time a little better. Make sure that you really push yourself to the best you can be.
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